Thesis 1.15 Feedback and Revisions 1
Blog post 15: Draft your practice presentation
What kind of feedback did you get? How will this impact what you do next?
Explain why the sizes ecosystem are different?
Put quotes on ecosystem
Focus on care model which doesn’t support beyond crisis
Explain on a slide approach to access
Explain that we aren’t focusing on support model out of convenience but because the care model doesn’t work
Year for quote
Pull organizations out of the next steps slide
Map where ecosystems parts are situated in the timeline
Include more of our research, who we talked to and what we found
This was all very helpful feedback. We did synthesize a lot of the information but could be clearer about all of the research we have done. For the next revision we will add more quotes and standardize/ elaborate on the ecosystem more.